Guys after a long break I'm back with my new story The Making...from now i'll make it a point to update my blog every week mostly on the weekends....
here's the link for the story and i am also providing the pologue of the story
Prologue
The gunshots sounded like a bomber emptying its belly onto the earth below. Each gunshot pounded his ear again and again since the last twenty years. The sight of seeing loved ones fall dead in front of you is heart rendering. He has witnessed death in its closet possible manner. His mother ran into the house quickly, picked him up with all the energy left in her and pushed him up into the attic. But the glass of the window which the attic faced was not sufficient to hold the bullet, it struck its target, as soon as he got onto the attic his mother fell dead. But amid all the pandemonium he managed to see his mother’s killer’s forearm and a serpent’s tattoo on it and the sniper disappeared the very next moment.
download link :
http://rapidshare.com/files/124029325/The_Making_prin.doc.html
Saturday, June 21, 2008
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4 comments:
Hey thanx 4 d comment nd 4 d wishes 4 my freedom..lolz....
Nd yea abt ur Prologue...Must mention Narration is quite professional...Makes me envy U...coz even once i was thinkin abt writin a story but ended up drawing cartoons :p
Nywayz will read d entire story nd will get bck 2 u...Kewl blog...C ya!
Honestly urs was d first murder story i ve ever read...Coz i m totally into Indian author's Fun filled stories..
D Narration as i said before was Pretty appreciatable...d storyline and d flow was too good indeed..But i would say D Character Gabreil needed more description nd incidents 2 support over...
Nywayz was Gr8 readin it...hope 2 read more of ur works...
P.s :Next time save it as a PDF file such dat no1 can copy ur content..c ya!
wise use of words...
the narration was great...!!! seemingly interesting...
:)
by reading the prologue I felt that It will be amazing...
I will think of downloading.
Vinayak
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