My new story... The Making

Guys after a long break I'm back with my new story The Making...from now i'll make it a point to update my blog every week mostly on the weekends....
here's the link for the story and i am also providing the pologue of the story

Prologue
The gunshots sounded like a bomber emptying its belly onto the earth below. Each gunshot pounded his ear again and again since the last twenty years. The sight of seeing loved ones fall dead in front of you is heart rendering. He has witnessed death in its closet possible manner. His mother ran into the house quickly, picked him up with all the energy left in her and pushed him up into the attic. But the glass of the window which the attic faced was not sufficient to hold the bullet, it struck its target, as soon as he got onto the attic his mother fell dead. But amid all the pandemonium he managed to see his mother’s killer’s forearm and a serpent’s tattoo on it and the sniper disappeared the very next moment.

download link :
http://rapidshare.com/files/124029325/The_Making_prin.doc.html